Author's Note for Draft Three

In my third draft, I am looking for help with fine-tuning my paper. Citing issues, phrasing, word choice, and the little things like that are what I could use the most help with. I think the substance of my paper is good, and I think there is a good balance of summary and analysis. I made a few changes to y works cited, so a check over of that would be good too.

I think I am close to the end with this, and I obviously have to be too, but I am happy with where I am at this point with my third draft.